frostbite
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I agree with tectak. I am finding that the best pieces are the hardest for me to comment on, and even though I haven't posted anything in serious, I spend a lot of time reading the poems and the comments there. It's where I learn the most and I feel this poem belongs there. I don't feel that the "underlying" metaphor is detached from the poem at all. It's subtext is always there and woven nicely. - Paul
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frostbite - by RSaba - 09-14-2014, 02:00 PM
RE: frostbite - by billy - 09-14-2014, 07:10 PM
RE: frostbite - by rowens - 09-15-2014, 01:31 AM
RE: frostbite - by tectak - 09-15-2014, 02:53 AM
RE: frostbite - by Tiger the Lion - 09-15-2014, 11:49 AM
RE: frostbite - by 71degrees - 09-15-2014, 12:02 PM
RE: frostbite - by 71degrees - 09-17-2014, 09:59 AM
RE: frostbite - by Tiger the Lion - 09-15-2014, 12:23 PM
RE: frostbite - by billy - 09-15-2014, 06:15 PM
RE: frostbite - by ChristopherSea - 09-15-2014, 08:49 PM
RE: frostbite - by Wjames - 09-17-2014, 04:01 AM
RE: frostbite - by RSaba - 09-26-2014, 11:31 AM
RE: frostbite - by RSaba - 10-30-2014, 07:11 AM
RE: frostbite - by billy - 11-03-2014, 07:10 PM
RE: frostbite - by RSaba - 11-04-2014, 01:02 AM
RE: frostbite - by billy - 11-04-2014, 06:43 PM



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