09-15-2014, 11:49 AM
I agree with tectak. I am finding that the best pieces are the hardest for me to comment on, and even though I haven't posted anything in serious, I spend a lot of time reading the poems and the comments there. It's where I learn the most and I feel this poem belongs there. I don't feel that the "underlying" metaphor is detached from the poem at all. It's subtext is always there and woven nicely. - Paul

