09-12-2014, 01:13 AM
Although one might assume that a fallen branch is under a tree, IMO it is still an improvement over using tree twice. If you are drawing a picture, do you know what type of tree it is? That might be worth a try also.
Always remember that it is your poem and up to you to consider suggestions and toss back any you don't feel are right for your poem.
Always remember that it is your poem and up to you to consider suggestions and toss back any you don't feel are right for your poem.
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