09-11-2014, 07:34 AM
The darkness and the fact that you like it is an interesting thing that you picked. It is strange but i think that's a good thing. It catches the attention of the reader. The word cloud did not seem to fit into the lines.. maybe 'shadow' . Your topic is quit interesting because in this poem to you darkness means light in that you make darkness as a means of personal renewal. I think the poem could have been made a bit longer to show how the night serves you as light for renewal.