Whirling Dervish

Whirling Dervish

Mwaba don Offline

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09-11-2014, 05:23 AM

Nice poem. It has nice a well presented pattern and has good rhythm. I think you conveyed the meaning quit well.
Your combination of words is very good. I liked your poem

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Whirling Dervish - by Erthona - 07-19-2014, 09:17 AM

RE: Whirling Dervish - by faithlovedance22 - 09-10-2014, 09:58 AM

RE: Whirling Dervish - by Erthona - 09-11-2014, 05:15 AM

RE: Whirling Dervish - by Mwaba don - 09-11-2014, 05:23 AM

RE: Whirling Dervish - by Erthona - 10-02-2014, 12:29 AM

RE: Whirling Dervish - by trueenigma - 10-02-2014, 01:40 PM

RE: Whirling Dervish - by billy - 10-02-2014, 02:42 PM

RE: Whirling Dervish - by Erthona - 10-03-2014, 02:02 AM

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