If I Awake to Flames After I Die

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If I Awake to Flames After I Die

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09-09-2014, 11:11 AM

(09-04-2014, 12:12 PM)CameranMorgan Wrote: Love this poem. It tells the truth about our sins. The punctuation is ok though it could be a little bit better but no by much though! I love the rhythm and the style. Keep up the good work!

(09-09-2014, 10:38 AM)an_unread_rose Wrote: Wow very deep, a lot would not admit to it, but I bet they feel the same

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If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by alatos - 01-30-2014, 01:41 AM

RE: If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by Blake - 01-30-2014, 02:35 AM

RE: If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by gslegrá - 01-31-2014, 10:48 PM

RE: If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by LickinLyrics - 02-02-2014, 07:59 PM

RE: If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by Brian - 07-20-2014, 01:22 PM

RE: If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by KROD - 07-21-2014, 09:16 AM

RE: If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by billy - 07-23-2014, 06:31 PM

RE: If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by SomeRandom - 08-04-2014, 02:23 PM

RE: If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by L Oquence - 08-13-2014, 06:12 AM

RE: If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by bwasroy - 08-16-2014, 07:30 AM

RE: If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by konstantin27 - 08-16-2014, 10:19 PM

RE: If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by KerouacJack - 08-18-2014, 07:41 AM

RE: If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by ellajam - 09-09-2014, 11:11 AM

RE: If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by Pyxx - 09-12-2014, 12:59 PM

RE: If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by Mwaba don - 09-20-2014, 08:03 PM

RE: If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by Sa - 01-19-2015, 07:05 AM

RE: If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by Nahtaivel616 - 01-21-2015, 04:20 PM

RE: If I Awake to Flames After I Die - by bena - 01-24-2015, 09:20 PM

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