09-05-2014, 01:56 PM
Thnx danny, and benna, and Tiger, I appreciate the feedback. I think ima give this one more edit.
@bena, yeah I had wrote half the poem, then the title, and thought the second half would have a more specific metaphor with a red tide, but idk didnt turn out that way > . <
@Tiger, Good find, yeah I meant "closest to and furthest from" i''ll have to fix that, surprised no one else noticed.
But yeah thnx all cheers cheers
@bena, yeah I had wrote half the poem, then the title, and thought the second half would have a more specific metaphor with a red tide, but idk didnt turn out that way > . <
@Tiger, Good find, yeah I meant "closest to and furthest from" i''ll have to fix that, surprised no one else noticed.
But yeah thnx all cheers cheers