The Key of Heart

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This was a disorienting read. You have a few really nice moments in here, the temple bells, the flying ribbons, and the dancing fingers specifically caught my attention, but they kinda get lost in the form. The punctuation/lack of periods made this hard to read, and I don't know if the one word lines do a lot for the poem. I would like to see this with a more str8 forward structure and less abstractions. Just my 2cents, Thnx for sharing ^_^