"Hero"

[danny_]

Let's hail to our Hero!
We sing, we praise, and we fight for him!
For the sake of children… for the sake of tomorrow…
Our heart is given, to the glorious one.

It's not a vote that we give, but it is our trust!
Our hands cover in blood! Our body falls to the ground!
We dream about hope, yet wake up in the darker day…
Oh, how foolish we are… to fight for nothing.

Now that we remember… about the day we forget…
Our enemies… once we were brothers…
Such a sin we’ve commit… this regret which we’ve bare…
All this for glorious one, who don't give a damn!

lot of feeling, lot of disdain for being misled and regret for terrible acts.

if this is about a specific war or ongoing conflict, maybe the title could be specific too. then at least people who are familiar with the conflict will relate to this poem quite easily.

either way, it would be nice to see some more specifics in the poem. but very good poem for a second language. keep going.