09-04-2014, 03:30 AM
"Not another sonnet". Well that's good because it isn't. Aside from the fact it has no rhyme scheme, is not written in IP, and it is missing five lines, I guess if you want to call it a sonnet you can.
The metaphor of being in love , is like an a addiction, or an illness is fairly overused as it represents the central metaphor used during the golden age of movies: not to mention such songs from that era such as "I've Got You Under My Skin", or the idea that I've got an inch only can scratch, et. al..
If you have to put an explanatory note at the end, then the poem has already failed.
Dale
The metaphor of being in love , is like an a addiction, or an illness is fairly overused as it represents the central metaphor used during the golden age of movies: not to mention such songs from that era such as "I've Got You Under My Skin", or the idea that I've got an inch only can scratch, et. al..
If you have to put an explanatory note at the end, then the poem has already failed.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.