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At Peace
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08-31-2014, 10:55 PM
using what i've already learned i have revised this again. slimmer, less words. couldn't reduce the end as much as i wanted to, but the thing is better. crit welcome
"The best way out is always through."-Robert Frost
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RE: At Peace - by ChristopherSea - 08-28-2014, 07:00 PM
RE: At Peace - by billy - 08-28-2014, 07:03 PM
RE: At Peace - by danny_ - 08-29-2014, 01:55 AM
RE: At Peace - by ellajam - 08-29-2014, 02:19 AM
RE: At Peace - by billy - 08-29-2014, 06:59 PM
RE: At Peace - by danny_ - 08-29-2014, 05:35 PM
RE: At Peace - by danny_ - 08-31-2014, 10:55 PM
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