Not another sonnet
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(08-25-2014, 11:18 AM)alatos Wrote:  Mosquito bite on my ankle,
I’m up all night scratching you.
The bleeding starts, but my fingernails keep on raking.
Why can’t the itch just stop?
For a few days, you keep it up.
For a few more, you dry into a scab.
Finally, you’re just a tiny purple scar.
I don’t even have to look at you
if I don’t want to.
I can definitely relate to this poem, but it feels like I'm reading a bunch of statements as opposed to an entire piece. It is more like a story in my opinion
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Not another sonnet - by alatos - 08-25-2014, 11:18 AM
RE: Not another sonnet - by QDeathstar - 08-25-2014, 12:59 PM
RE: Not another sonnet - by billy - 08-25-2014, 04:49 PM
RE: Not another sonnet - by bob68 - 08-25-2014, 07:00 PM
RE: Not another sonnet - by Bleumeon - 08-31-2014, 07:56 PM
RE: Not another sonnet - by ThePinsir - 09-04-2014, 12:19 AM
RE: Not another sonnet - by Erthona - 09-04-2014, 03:30 AM
RE: Not another sonnet - by alatos - 09-04-2014, 08:08 AM



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