08-30-2014, 02:17 PM
I agree with milo on this one. The words like "suddenly" had no effect on me. I can see where you are going with this poem but I just can't feel it yet.
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Of The Untitled - by QDeathstar - 08-26-2014, 12:09 PM
RE: Of The Untitled - by alatos - 08-27-2014, 05:56 AM
RE: Of The Untitled - by QDeathstar - 08-27-2014, 10:18 AM
RE: Of The Untitled - by Tiger the Lion - 08-27-2014, 07:35 AM
RE: Of The Untitled - by ellajam - 08-30-2014, 03:46 AM
RE: Of The Untitled - by QDeathstar - 08-30-2014, 05:22 AM
RE: Of The Untitled - by ellajam - 08-30-2014, 05:37 AM
RE: Of The Untitled - by milo - 08-30-2014, 06:25 AM
RE: Of The Untitled - by QDeathstar - 08-30-2014, 06:55 AM
RE: Of The Untitled - by scoff - 08-30-2014, 11:24 AM
RE: Of The Untitled - by PHTj - 08-30-2014, 02:17 PM
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