Of The Untitled

Of The Untitled

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08-30-2014, 06:55 AM

Thanks for the read milo. While you have some valid points, I think your edit completely changes the meaning and feeling of the poem. The modifiers in this poem speak to it's presence, and the single words, it's pace. Or, that was my intention.

I appreciate your comments.

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Of The Untitled - by QDeathstar - 08-26-2014, 12:09 PM

RE: Of The Untitled - by alatos - 08-27-2014, 05:56 AM

RE: Of The Untitled - by QDeathstar - 08-27-2014, 10:18 AM

RE: Of The Untitled - by Tiger the Lion - 08-27-2014, 07:35 AM

RE: Of The Untitled - by ellajam - 08-30-2014, 03:46 AM

RE: Of The Untitled - by QDeathstar - 08-30-2014, 05:22 AM

RE: Of The Untitled - by ellajam - 08-30-2014, 05:37 AM

RE: Of The Untitled - by milo - 08-30-2014, 06:25 AM

RE: Of The Untitled - by QDeathstar - 08-30-2014, 06:55 AM

RE: Of The Untitled - by scoff - 08-30-2014, 11:24 AM

RE: Of The Untitled - by PHTj - 08-30-2014, 02:17 PM

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