Red Tide Procession Edit

[danny_]

i like the style, i like the flow, i like the images. overall i don't really know what it's talking about, so it's abstract for me. but it sort of promised something concrete at the beginning, then turned abstract. i was personally getting this image of summer and hunting and meat and hanging meat to dry, you're laying in bed for a long time (not sure why.) then we've got a dream of steamships and a totally abstract ending. and i would bet you were putting a feeling into words as best you can, some feeling of drifting off to perfect sleep. but i had to guess, and i'm probably wrong.

keep it up and post more.