08-27-2014, 03:01 PM
Thnx for reading/replying ellajam and billy. Yeah, it is good to be back, and you were both real helpful.
I've updated the op, might have made it worst > . < The criticism was pretty consistent in both critiques so I tried to address those things. Thnx thnx
I've updated the op, might have made it worst > . < The criticism was pretty consistent in both critiques so I tried to address those things. Thnx thnx

