08-27-2014, 10:18 AM
(08-27-2014, 05:56 AM)alatos Wrote: I'm not quite sure what this poem is getting at. I think if you clarified what exactly you mean by "imperfect recitals of thought" it could be helpful, because the rest of the poem is straightforward enough. And are these recital of thought usually titled somehow? Also, the apparently random rhyme scheme seems to go well with the theme you have going around being terrified by the unfamiliar, so nice work there
Very interesting point about the blueprints... I'll have to consider that.
Imperfect recitals of thought aren't titled. They are unfinished, unpolished, imperfect, untitled.
Finally, some oral molestation I can use! Thanks Tiger.