Wretch Noblesse

Wretch Noblesse

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08-25-2014, 06:46 PM

A polished piece Dale. My only critique would be that the line, 'he does not yet know of war...' It sounds archaic compared to the other language. Maybe simply: 'he does not know of war yet...'

I agree, it's a futile cycle for certain.

Good to see you up and about my friend! Smile

My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

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Wretch Noblesse - by Erthona - 08-23-2014, 06:45 AM

RE: Wretch Noblesse - by tectak - 08-23-2014, 07:07 AM

RE: Wretch Noblesse - by billy - 08-23-2014, 06:36 PM

RE: Wretch Noblesse - by Erthona - 08-25-2014, 11:11 AM

RE: Wretch Noblesse - by ChristopherSea - 08-25-2014, 06:46 PM

RE: Wretch Noblesse - by poe - 08-25-2014, 09:48 PM

RE: Wretch Noblesse - by Erthona - 08-25-2014, 10:21 PM

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