Playing with Jung

[cjchaffin]

Green and yellow -- purty! And yes, it's definitely better. (I really just want to say "close, but no cigar" now...)

---

I like the edit, it provides more of a contrast between the two playmates. It's also a beautiful image.

edit #1:

In dream-like states where thoughts emerge
from unconscious whim, we carve stone
sculptures on opposite garden ends –

mine is a goat with webbed feet,
Carl’s is a duck with horns;
this is a meaningful coincidence.

Later, we play with our wise inner figures.
He dances on the grass, flinging yellow petals
while I sketch mandalas in green and gold sand.


original:

In dream-like states where thoughts emerge
from unconscious whim, we carve stone
sculptures on opposite garden ends –

mine is a goat with webbed feet,
Carl’s is a duck with horns;
this is a meaningful coincidence.

Later, we play in the sand
with our wise inner figures.
He dances while I draw hearts.

thank you, miss ella!