Playing with Jung
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I like the edit, it provides more of a contrast between the two playmates. It's also a beautiful image.

(08-21-2014, 08:01 AM)cjchaffin Wrote:  edit #1:

In dream-like states where thoughts emerge
from unconscious whim, we carve stone
sculptures on opposite garden ends –

mine is a goat with webbed feet,
Carl’s is a duck with horns;
this is a meaningful coincidence.

Later, we play with our wise inner figures.
He dances on the grass, flinging yellow petals
while I sketch mandalas in green and gold sand.


original:

In dream-like states where thoughts emerge
from unconscious whim, we carve stone
sculptures on opposite garden ends –

mine is a goat with webbed feet,
Carl’s is a duck with horns;
this is a meaningful coincidence.

Later, we play in the sand
with our wise inner figures.
He dances while I draw hearts.
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Playing with Jung - by cjchaffin - 08-21-2014, 08:01 AM
RE: Playing with Jung - by ajcohen613 - 08-22-2014, 04:18 AM
RE: Playing with Jung - by cjchaffin - 08-22-2014, 04:58 AM
RE: Playing with Jung - by Leanne - 08-22-2014, 04:47 AM
RE: Playing with Jung - by Leanne - 08-22-2014, 05:42 AM
RE: Playing with Jung - by cjchaffin - 08-22-2014, 07:47 AM
RE: Playing with Jung - by Leanne - 08-22-2014, 12:03 PM
RE: Playing with Jung - by cjchaffin - 08-23-2014, 02:33 AM
RE: Playing with Jung - by ellajam - 08-23-2014, 02:52 AM
RE: Playing with Jung - by Leanne - 08-23-2014, 06:36 AM
RE: Playing with Jung - by cjchaffin - 08-23-2014, 07:34 AM
RE: Playing with Jung - by billy - 08-23-2014, 06:15 PM
RE: Playing with Jung - by cjchaffin - 08-24-2014, 12:40 AM



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