08-20-2014, 03:59 AM
(08-19-2014, 08:17 AM)KerouacJack Wrote: Yes john that is exactly what my poem was intended to depict. Yes and your point on the "insignificant" line is also true, what work would you best describe the sense of being part of the universe?what work would you best describe the sense of being part of the universe?
Yes I agree I try to tell the poem instead of showing and letting the reader interpret. I will research help on the Internet and with yours and everyone else's help create a second draft. Cheers!!
Hello KJ, I take them as I find them, and have truly read too many to pick one out, I find that each one will bring something new to me ( it's why I read poetry I think.)
I like haiku too.
JG.