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[KerouacJack]

I have just looked through his page and it all seems amazing help. Ended up laughing on several occasions as I knew my "poem" included some of the novice elements he frequently references. I'm going to study his work in greater depth and above all...read! Could you suggest any good poets? I'm reading Whitman, Rambaud, Alan Ginsberg and Jack Kerouac's novels.

Thanks again.