08-19-2014, 08:17 AM
Yes john that is exactly what my poem was intended to depict. Yes and your point on the "insignificant" line is also true, what work would you best describe the sense of being part of the universe?
Yes I agree I try to tell the poem instead of showing and letting the reader interpret. I will research help on the Internet and with yours and everyone else's help create a second draft. Cheers!!
Yes I agree I try to tell the poem instead of showing and letting the reader interpret. I will research help on the Internet and with yours and everyone else's help create a second draft. Cheers!!