08-18-2014, 07:38 PM
(08-18-2014, 07:30 PM)billy Wrote: i removed my comment as it seems the it said rise and not fallHa, me too, but the poem just says they swear to not jump, not that they won't.
the last line is all about trust which is often misplaced, i always jumped off
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