If I Awake to Flames After I Die

[konstantin27]

I could especially use help with punctuation!

If I awake to flames after I die
to make eternal payment for my sin,
I will not raise my voice to question why
remembering the man that I had been.
But cast into oblivion, if He,
the Perfect Judge, should look my way with grace
and offer lovingly to pardon me
if only I would run again life’s race

I loved this part, its very rhythmic.
In my opinion you lose it afterwards.
But still I love the idea of looking to your past and judging yourself.