08-16-2014, 09:25 AM
(08-16-2014, 05:41 AM)konstantin27 Wrote: life exists for those who seek for herI like the idea. I think the last three lines could done much better. Creative & insightful, i see lots of potential if more time were to spent on this.
not those who walk by without looking in her eyes
but those who'll grab her by her thighs
they'll say 'I love you'
and 'I'll never say goodbye'
I prefer to be as forgettable as possible.