life

[Keith]

life exists for those who seek for her You don't need the second for and you could drop life since its in your title.
not those who walk by without looking in her eyes
but those who'll grab her by her thighs
they'll say 'I love you'
and 'I'll never say goodbye'

Hi K27 this one seems very rushed.
Because you are using the same end and internal rhymes they come across as a little bit forced. I like the idea of the poem about grasping life and making the most of it, but I would say the poem doesn't really go very far there is only the grabbing thighs image for the reader to engage with, the last line is weak and sounds forced to pick up that rhyme again.

You should be giving some more feedback to others and reading some more it helps you be more critical of your own poems before posting. Best Keith