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Best Left Alone
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08-15-2014, 11:34 AM
Hey WJ. I loved this poem after S1. I could tell what you were saying in the first stanza. But it wasn't easy. It read disjointed and not quite grammatically clear.( at least with present punctuation) The 2nd and 3rd stanzas presented none of those issues for me and sold me on the whole. Thanks for sharing- Paul
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Best Left Alone - by Wjames - 08-15-2014, 11:08 AM
RE: Best Left Alone - by Tiger the Lion - 08-15-2014, 11:34 AM
RE: Best Left Alone - by billy - 08-15-2014, 05:55 PM
RE: Best Left Alone - by ellajam - 08-15-2014, 08:21 PM
RE: Best Left Alone - by Wjames - 08-16-2014, 02:26 PM
RE: Best Left Alone - by J.C. Fontenot - 10-26-2014, 07:12 PM
RE: Best Left Alone - by Kelvin - 10-30-2014, 06:17 PM
RE: Best Left Alone - by Pyxx - 11-01-2014, 08:57 PM
RE: Best Left Alone - by SimikPK - 11-02-2014, 10:48 PM
RE: Best Left Alone - by Erthona - 11-07-2014, 08:56 AM
RE: Best Left Alone - by Wjames - 11-09-2014, 07:12 AM
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