Happiness Forgets

[SomeRandom]

A loose suited cool linen swagger
eclipses the burden of daylight
adjusting down well-trodden steps, would you consider "decrepit" in place of "well-trodden" ?
nicotine fingernails trail on billboard walls
to an ugly door that opens with a mumble.

The bar stools gesture through half closed eyes I like how the doors and bar stools are personified, furthermore I like how they seem irritated and bored
lifted from beer mat stares,
closing again with a head back sip.

Hips sway through pungent clouds,
reverb touches seersucker on stilettos,
heavy handed from a dub step base.

He falls familiar to a corner seat and closes his mind, For some reason I felt like it should be "the" corner seat, since it's familiar (to him?).
behind the aroma of a Black Russian, he slips
under the underground again.

This is cool. I want to give more feedback but I'm having trouble even after several rereads. It's very tight and to the point.