07-29-2014, 09:18 AM
should i?
could i?
do i want to?
what if i mess up?
poor examples
all around me
yet the pressure lives
i love
my life
as it is now
is there enough time?
logic tells me
money money
world will turn around
yet i
wonder
what end would be
why must i decide?
i see the joy
the selfless love
guiding little E
at times
witness
is all i need
will i have regrets?
people telling
all of the time
this is the right path
listen
smile, nod
no advice helps me
how do some just know?
should i?
could i?
do I want to?
can i really choose?
Thanks so much for your feedback! I'm 100% new to writing poetry but have been feeling compelled to write lately
could i?
do i want to?
what if i mess up?
poor examples
all around me
yet the pressure lives
i love
my life
as it is now
is there enough time?
logic tells me
money money
world will turn around
yet i
wonder
what end would be
why must i decide?
i see the joy
the selfless love
guiding little E
at times
witness
is all i need
will i have regrets?
people telling
all of the time
this is the right path
listen
smile, nod
no advice helps me
how do some just know?
should i?
could i?
do I want to?
can i really choose?
Thanks so much for your feedback! I'm 100% new to writing poetry but have been feeling compelled to write lately