If I Awake to Flames After I Die

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I could especially use help with punctuation!

If I awake to flames after I die
to make eternal payment for my sin,
I will not raise my voice to question why
remembering the man that I had been.
But cast into oblivion, if He,
the Perfect Judge, should look my way with grace
and offer lovingly to pardon me
if only I would run again life’s race
more faithfully, without conceited pride,
the greed-filled lies, the lust, this time to live:
my passions and my past to set aside…
I know one thing alone I'd never give.
Those moments spent with you I would not sell
to save my soul eternity in hell.

I found lots of pointless commas

Hi, Joshua, welcome. I hope you understand that your comment will not help the poet unless you point out which commas are "useless" and why. Please be more specific. Thanks./mod.