Failures
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I like this, very successful. Smile

You may want to reconsider your breaks, maybe


Tired of writing an unending love poem
on the shredded pre-kindling
that fills my recycling bin, I vowed
to become a novelist.

Or something else. Smile Nice work.



(07-21-2014, 03:49 PM)Wjames Wrote:  Tired of writing an unending love poem
on the shredded pre-kindling that
fills my recycling bin, I vowed to
become a novelist.
billy wrote:welcome to the site. make it your own, wear it like a well loved slipper and wear it out. ella pleads:please click forum titles for posting guidelines, important threads. New poet? Try Poetic DevicesandWard's Tips

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Messages In This Thread
Failures - by Wjames - 07-21-2014, 03:49 PM
RE: Failures - by ellajam - 07-21-2014, 08:23 PM
RE: Failures - by Wjames - 07-27-2014, 06:49 AM
RE: Failures - by Dupuis - 07-29-2014, 02:21 AM
RE: Failures - by Erthona - 07-29-2014, 02:29 AM
RE: Failures - by Wjames - 07-29-2014, 01:56 PM
RE: Failures - by billy - 07-29-2014, 07:58 PM



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