High Sierra edit 2

[maximumjake]

Not up for a bit of light reading? In retrospect, probably should have kept this in poetry discussion.

I'm really happy with this second edit...thinking the poem is finished, unless someone else has ideas I could put into play.

Makes me laugh how I only meant to type up a quick response to Dale's critique, and it turned into a trip report...but I guess that's what this poem wanted to be in the first place.

Jacob