07-19-2014, 04:10 PM
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It occurred to me recently:
have an outlet for creativity (that I needed an outlet for my creativity)
and make it cohesive. (Make what cohesive? "outlet". or creativity)
Should I listen to a clever businessman
channeling new age nonsense
to an upper-middle class audience? (As the speaker speaks of this disdainfully, answer is obviously no.)
Or do I learn yoga,
or drink wine,
dance a little? (Is the speaker
Can't paint, or play my own music...
I think I will see it live and up close:
High Sierra trees,
and fire women...
deliberating to throw images like nets ( you really need "deliberating, maybe debating whether. Also." to throw image nets, or nets made of images )
to see what comes back;
a fish spun in the
flushed out realms of canyons
outstretched upon a silver spike.
One white circular tab of acid,
one strong mushroom
weighing approximately 1.8 grams,
a swig of rye for some warmth
prepares me to walk over
to see Lettuce perform
their infamous late night set.
Rotating through the backstage passage,
engaging in metallic smells
popular with the kids these days;
tastes like concentrated copper
as I lick my finger of the MDMA dose... (Is dose needed)
Healing energy fueled by melting sounds
is what I needed on this Independence Day holiday.
There are too many points: cohesively channeling at the start, and then relating a drug trip. I did like your explanation/images of fire works. Those are some good lines.
Dale
It occurred to me recently:
have an outlet for creativity (that I needed an outlet for my creativity)
and make it cohesive. (Make what cohesive? "outlet". or creativity)
Should I listen to a clever businessman
channeling new age nonsense
to an upper-middle class audience? (As the speaker speaks of this disdainfully, answer is obviously no.)
Or do I learn yoga,
or drink wine,
dance a little? (Is the speaker
Can't paint, or play my own music...
I think I will see it live and up close:
High Sierra trees,
and fire women...
deliberating to throw images like nets ( you really need "deliberating, maybe debating whether. Also." to throw image nets, or nets made of images )
to see what comes back;
a fish spun in the
flushed out realms of canyons
outstretched upon a silver spike.
One white circular tab of acid,
one strong mushroom
weighing approximately 1.8 grams,
a swig of rye for some warmth
prepares me to walk over
to see Lettuce perform
their infamous late night set.
Rotating through the backstage passage,
engaging in metallic smells
popular with the kids these days;
tastes like concentrated copper
as I lick my finger of the MDMA dose... (Is dose needed)
Healing energy fueled by melting sounds
is what I needed on this Independence Day holiday.
There are too many points: cohesively channeling at the start, and then relating a drug trip. I did like your explanation/images of fire works. Those are some good lines.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.