High Sierra edit 2

[tectak]

Yes...muchos bueno!
Nits in text.
tectak

It occurred to me recently:
have an outlet for creativity
and make it cohesive.
Should I listen to a clever businessman
channeling new age nonsense
to an upper-middle class audience?
Or do I learn yoga,
or drink wine,
dance a little?
Can't paint, or play my own music...
I think I will see it live and up close:
high sierra trees, Should High Sierra be capitalised
and fire women...
aim a infinite time later, an
to throw images like nets
to see what comes back;
a fish spun in the
flushed out realms of canyons
outstretched upon a silver spike,
dotted by lime green mechanized sounds. You are off again. Flashback?

It was one white circular tab of acid,
one strong mushroom
weighing approximately 1.8 grams, Not 1.9 gms then. Cute to detail this..I think it works. Especially contrasted with "swig"
a swig of rye for some warmth
prepares me to walk over If this is this then you don't need to open this stanza with "It was...".In fact, it is wrong syntax to so do. Read it out loud. See. I am right. Yes?
to see Lettuce perform
their infamous late night set.

Stumbling through the backstage passage,
tasting metallic white powder
popular with the kids these days. Not a sentence. Correct it.
Tastes like concentrated copper
licking my finger of the Empathy. Hmmm. Suspect reasoning here...that is to say, I don't get it.
Healing energy fueled by melting sounds
is what I needed on this Independence Day holiday.

....but what a good idea. Well done for embracing it.
Good egg,
Very Best,
tectak