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07-12-2014, 10:15 AM

Thanks Paul,

I think all of your comments are spot on, and will take them onboard when I do the edit.

Thanks again,

Dale

How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.

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The Race - by Erthona - 07-12-2014, 08:14 AM

RE: The Race - by just mercedes - 07-12-2014, 08:38 AM

RE: The Race - by Erthona - 07-12-2014, 08:59 AM

RE: The Race - by just mercedes - 07-12-2014, 10:31 AM

RE: The Race - by Tiger the Lion - 07-12-2014, 09:56 AM

RE: The Race - by Erthona - 07-12-2014, 10:15 AM

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