07-11-2014, 06:53 PM
The best thing about creative expression, is that it doesn't matter what the F*** it means as long as it means something to you, unless you are writing for gratification, by stretching out for recognition from your peers, also if you are some Neuroplacisity junky...am i right or am i right?
Seriously though, I speak broken English and have since the day I broke the plain of language and the communicative barrier between the blissfully naive and the anxiously panicked.
So please, take my comment(s) lightly, as my intentions are only to commend you for a "job well done" and to have a laugh.
truthfully, the poem seemed forced to me, but who the hell am I to tell you that...I def picked up on it being about booze though, actually thought you may have been talking about cocaine for the first couple lines (pun intended). Anyways have a wonderful evening Sir. Thanks for your soulful exposure.
Seriously though, I speak broken English and have since the day I broke the plain of language and the communicative barrier between the blissfully naive and the anxiously panicked.
So please, take my comment(s) lightly, as my intentions are only to commend you for a "job well done" and to have a laugh.
truthfully, the poem seemed forced to me, but who the hell am I to tell you that...I def picked up on it being about booze though, actually thought you may have been talking about cocaine for the first couple lines (pun intended). Anyways have a wonderful evening Sir. Thanks for your soulful exposure.