07-07-2014, 09:46 PM
SilverMire, Dale, thanks a lot for your help. Yes I know, this poem needs work and I can't personally say it's finished, this is why I needed strong feedback.
Alex
Alex
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The day flew painfully
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The day flew painfully - by Alexearth - 07-06-2014, 08:09 PM
RE: The day flew painfully - by SilverMire - 07-07-2014, 07:19 PM
RE: The day flew painfully - by Erthona - 07-07-2014, 08:09 PM
RE: The day flew painfully - by Alexearth - 07-07-2014, 09:46 PM
RE: The day flew painfully - by KROD - 07-14-2014, 05:21 AM
RE: The day flew painfully - by catfacemeowmers - 07-15-2014, 02:34 PM
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