07-06-2014, 09:43 PM
(07-06-2014, 12:34 PM)Brownlie Wrote: Thanks for the replies, and the helpful suggestions. I hadn't thought to use debris, and those bleeding hearts are quite cool (The legend is also interesting). I guess this poem has a little problem with clarity, but what I was trying to go for with the heart glued swords thing was that bees have stingers attached to their hearts.I didn't know that, interesting.
Maybe something other than glued could inform me in the poem, I'm not sure it's common knowledge.
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