It Was a Hack Job
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(07-06-2014, 12:57 PM)Celestina Waters Wrote:  I want to erase this mess and start all over.
Be careful not to lost the great ideas of, millipede, which is a fantastic thought for the scar and stitches.

Translucent, is also a great thought that delivers on the imagery of the scar coupled with millipede.

You were right to put "hack job" in inverted comma's it worked because of that, I sometimes do that if I am acknowledging a cliche.

I also liked pale worm.

All the best. JG
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It Was a Hack Job - by Celestina Waters - 07-06-2014, 06:57 AM
RE: It Was a Hack Job - by trueenigma - 07-06-2014, 10:30 AM
RE: It Was a Hack Job - by Celestina Waters - 07-06-2014, 11:31 AM
RE: It Was a Hack Job - by Brownlie - 07-06-2014, 12:23 PM
RE: It Was a Hack Job - by Celestina Waters - 07-06-2014, 12:57 PM
RE: It Was a Hack Job - by Brownlie - 07-06-2014, 01:17 PM
RE: It Was a Hack Job - by trueenigma - 07-06-2014, 01:33 PM
RE: It Was a Hack Job - by John Galt - 07-06-2014, 05:53 PM



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