07-06-2014, 05:53 PM
(07-06-2014, 12:57 PM)Celestina Waters Wrote: I want to erase this mess and start all over.Be careful not to lost the great ideas of, millipede, which is a fantastic thought for the scar and stitches.
Translucent, is also a great thought that delivers on the imagery of the scar coupled with millipede.
You were right to put "hack job" in inverted comma's it worked because of that, I sometimes do that if I am acknowledging a cliche.
I also liked pale worm.
All the best. JG