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It Was a Hack Job

It Was a Hack Job
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07-06-2014, 01:17 PM
(07-06-2014, 12:57 PM)Celestina Waters Wrote:  I want to erase this mess and start all over.
Well, I think you have some stuff to work with here. I mean a guy seeing a suicide scar and thinking it is from a surgery is pretty interesting.
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Messages In This Thread
It Was a Hack Job - by Celestina Waters - 07-06-2014, 06:57 AM
RE: It Was a Hack Job - by trueenigma - 07-06-2014, 10:30 AM
RE: It Was a Hack Job - by Celestina Waters - 07-06-2014, 11:31 AM
RE: It Was a Hack Job - by Brownlie - 07-06-2014, 12:23 PM
RE: It Was a Hack Job - by Celestina Waters - 07-06-2014, 12:57 PM
RE: It Was a Hack Job - by Brownlie - 07-06-2014, 01:17 PM
RE: It Was a Hack Job - by trueenigma - 07-06-2014, 01:33 PM
RE: It Was a Hack Job - by John Galt - 07-06-2014, 05:53 PM



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