06-24-2014, 05:33 AM
(06-24-2014, 02:43 AM)Cherrie666pie Wrote:Thank You Cherrie666pie,
I think this is an absolutely beautiful poem it could definitely use a few edits though. It is a very pretty and a nice read but a little bit confusing. I'm not sure what you are trying to portray in your writing, I sort of have an idea but I think you should give your message a little more emphasis. This poem has amazing potential though, I think you should just do a few more rewrites and I'll be looking forward to seeing them! (:
For your encouraging words. I'm gonna get crackin'!