06-17-2014, 06:43 AM
(06-17-2014, 06:16 AM)just mercedes Wrote:I see your point, english is not my first language.(06-17-2014, 06:06 AM)thislife Wrote:Hi again - up and down are directions, not things, so where is more appropriate than what.(06-16-2014, 08:04 AM)just mercedes Wrote:Hi! Thank you for your feedback. I don't think people have a choice in death, but they have a choice in life. And sometimes that could be hard to see.
"I spin around and I don't know
What is up and what is down?"
It means one choice you make: to dive down into dark water, would lead to the next, that you don't know if you will live or die, because you don't know what is up and down.
I will have a closer thought to your feedback on "Lights up, circumstantial"
I know what i thought, but i have to think a bit more why it is not working.
Thanks again.