Caprice
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(06-17-2014, 06:16 AM)just mercedes Wrote:  
(06-17-2014, 06:06 AM)thislife Wrote:  
(06-16-2014, 08:04 AM)just mercedes Wrote:  
Hi! Thank you for your feedback. I don't think people have a choice in death, but they have a choice in life. And sometimes that could be hard to see.

"I spin around and I don't know
What is up and what is down?"

It means one choice you make: to dive down into dark water, would lead to the next, that you don't know if you will live or die, because you don't know what is up and down.

I will have a closer thought to your feedback on "Lights up, circumstantial"
I know what i thought, but i have to think a bit more why it is not working.

Thanks again.
Hi again - up and down are directions, not things, so where is more appropriate than what.
I see your point, english is not my first language.
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Messages In This Thread
Caprice - by thislife - 06-16-2014, 06:53 AM
RE: Caprice - by just mercedes - 06-16-2014, 08:04 AM
RE: Caprice - by thislife - 06-17-2014, 06:06 AM
RE: Caprice - by just mercedes - 06-17-2014, 06:16 AM
RE: Caprice - by thislife - 06-17-2014, 06:43 AM
RE: Caprice - by mallaloca - 06-17-2014, 12:50 AM
RE: Caprice - by ellajam - 06-17-2014, 02:23 AM



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