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(06-16-2014, 02:20 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:  Aw, thanks for the punctuation compliment. Smile

When people say "without punctuation", they usually mean "without punctuation marks".
The poem above is punctuated; it just uses word rhythm, thematic shifts,
line breaks, and blank lines for punctuation instead of those itty-bitty marks.


exactly why it works :J:
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< happy father's day > - by rayheinrich - 06-15-2014, 07:57 PM
RE: < happy father's day > - by Brownlie - 06-16-2014, 11:46 AM
RE: < happy father's day > - by rayheinrich - 06-16-2014, 02:20 PM
RE: < happy father's day > - by billy - 06-16-2014, 04:55 PM
RE: < happy father's day > - by billy - 06-16-2014, 11:56 AM
RE: < happy father's day > - by poe - 06-16-2014, 01:16 PM



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