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06-16-2014, 11:56 AM
you make it feel personal whether it is or isn't i like the drip from the ceiling stanza as it was the crux of the poem but what else i really like was not noticing the lack of punctuation. okay you had a wavy - but i didn't count that. excellent, i wish all those who write without punctuation read this poem first in order to see how well it can be done.
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< happy father's day > - by rayheinrich - 06-15-2014, 07:57 PM
RE: < happy father's day > - by Brownlie - 06-16-2014, 11:46 AM
RE: < happy father's day > - by rayheinrich - 06-16-2014, 02:20 PM
RE: < happy father's day > - by billy - 06-16-2014, 04:55 PM
RE: < happy father's day > - by billy - 06-16-2014, 11:56 AM
RE: < happy father's day > - by poe - 06-16-2014, 01:16 PM
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