06-16-2014, 05:48 AM
You are what you practice, so if you practice being an asshole, that's what you will become. It's your behavior that is important, not what you think about yourself inside. In terms of the writing it reads more as disjointed prose, as there are none of the usual tropes associated with poetry. I will give you kudos for clarity. Most writing from kids around your age aren't nearly as clear or as grammatical (punctuation not withstanding).
Welcome to the site.
Dale
Welcome to the site.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.