Good-bye bitch!

[nb]

Hi all!

Um...

I enjoyed the reference to the play.

One of my favorites.

I also like how you played a trick on us.

That was not my intention.

I really like this. Which is odd, because I usually despise things which blend archaic writing/theme with modern ideas. I think you pulled it off.

Thanks, I think.

Uh, what's archaic about the writing?

Did you switch to tetrameter for the last stanza on purpose?

I had to Google just now to see what "tetrameter" is, so no I didn't.

I just sit around here hoping I don't happen to like rhyming poem so I don't feel the need to comment. And here you've come in and fouled my plan.

BUWAHAHAHAHA!!!

This seems written in Seuss verse...

Dr. Seuss is da man.

The last line brings home the conflict of moral choices, and how long it takes to overcome our upbringing, in a very succinct way.

Thank you.

My nephew's wife had IVF, after years of attempts...

We struck out 9 times (plus two FETs) before we realized that whipping the dead horse was kinda pointless.

Clever poem, with it's updated Shakespearean take on this. Great emotional tone I thought.

Overall very enjoyable.

Thank you (plural).

nb