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[jakesalive86]

Burnt, red sore like a rubbed raw bruise.
The overloaded heat radiates from the affected flesh.
Chaffed, it screams out against the restrictive clothing,
for soothing, a salve, smooth cool relief.

It will peel

[Brownlie]

Burnt, red sore like a rubbed raw bruise.
The overloaded heat radiates from the affected flesh.
Chaffed, it screams out against the restrictive clothing,
for soothing, a salve, smooth cool relief.

It will peel

Sun Burn!

[mallaloca]

Burnt, red sore like a rubbed raw bruise.
The overloaded heat radiates from the affected flesh.
Chaffed, it screams out against the restrictive clothing,
for soothing, a salve, smooth cool relief.

It will peel

Sun Burn!

Love it how you made sunburn feel poetical!