Unintended Suicide
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Jimmy, If I could write short story I'd be rich, but I can't which is why I am a broke poet Smile Maybe it will inspire someone to write a short story, who can actually do that well, I know my limitations.

Low-ret-uh, That's how they say it where I'm from Smile The government is too easy of a target. I made it slightly ambiguous from both perspective so it would give a more real look at the situation. what people don't understand is that when you make an older person expend more energy, it makes them irate because they simply don't have the energy to use, and the longer they have to expend it, the more painful it becomes. People then perceive this as mean. Are they rally mean? I would ask, isn't there more than one side as to what motivates a person who is mean?

Thanks for the read and comments guys, it is always appreciated.

Jimmy, did you see the poem I put up for you, it's called Hookah House.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Unintended Suicide - by Erthona - 06-10-2014, 02:00 PM
RE: Unintended Suicide - by Brownlie - 06-10-2014, 02:03 PM
RE: Unintended Suicide - by just mercedes - 06-10-2014, 02:15 PM
RE: Unintended Suicide - by Erthona - 06-11-2014, 01:46 AM
RE: Unintended Suicide - by LorettaYoung - 06-11-2014, 07:51 AM
RE: Unintended Suicide - by Jimmy Stark - 06-11-2014, 07:59 AM
RE: Unintended Suicide - by Erthona - 06-11-2014, 01:29 PM



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