06-09-2014, 11:55 PM
I'm confused about the form too--perhaps you just invented the Brownlielle, and if so, congratulations!
With no matter of form, I love the repetition of the strong line because it has wonderful imagery, and I did notice how you moved it from L1 to L2 to L3 to L4 in position of the stanza which I thought was rather clever. Lots of vivid imagery to jam a fork into in this one, and I enjoyed the read.
With no matter of form, I love the repetition of the strong line because it has wonderful imagery, and I did notice how you moved it from L1 to L2 to L3 to L4 in position of the stanza which I thought was rather clever. Lots of vivid imagery to jam a fork into in this one, and I enjoyed the read.