The Cheetah
#1
(Inspired by "The Eagle")

Couchant, he waits in the grass,
watching for the prey to pass,
striking, unexpected and fast.

Another gazelle into oblivion fades,
a victim of his unyielding raids
one death, out of a thousand shades.

The animals can never know;
nor will humans, it cannot be;
bound by chains as we wayward go,
slaves unto the tyrants three:

for, it is these matters sublunary
which arise with every dawn;
Greed: a pecuniary entity,
Death, and Time, its pawn.

The bones, bleached white
by the sun's unforgiving rays,
the cheetah long passed into night,
itself, he continues to decay.
*Warning: blatant tomfoolery above this line
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#2
As this is in poetry for fun, I won't critique, although I have to ask, why did you use "Couchant" instead of "crouched", and why did you change from three lines per stanza to four line per stanza. I am unfamiliar with the phrase "the tyrants three".

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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